Publishing Date: 2018
Genre: Fantasy
Rating: 3.7/5
Review: Quite a step up from “Mage Born” which read like a disheveled nurse in a pox factory…….jumpy. There is still a bit of circuitous back story that slows the read and emotional introspection that fails to go deep enough to matter. Explaining to yourself why you are, the way you are based on your past, is rather myopic and fails to transcend the reader to a backing position of the character. In short, you really don’t care what happens to them. The characters that you do care for have established themselves in prior novels and benefit from subtle development. This can be applied to new characters as seen by the young mage, Kalina. She has a short and intense background which quickly establishes her persona and is able to drift through the story line in meaningful ways.
So Wren sucks, as the constant bombardment of speshulness is never ending as is the “splaining” of her emotions based on every single event. If it is not tied to Drassia and her family, then the faults are more immediate and external to her experience. “Oh, I get all weepy and stuff, oh and I twemble too when thinking of dummy who died in agonizing ways as I was protecting myself. But it’s still my fawlt, I’m just sure of it. Forget that these raiders have killed everyone in their path and we’re next but I can’t kill again, even though I didn’t really kill in the first place…”. I thought Tianne would be the loser in this novel, but she turned out pretty good what with escaping a dead end predicament.
Balfruss and Munroe are really good, and the fight scenes between mages is really well done. There are a few show downs that drive the focus of this novel. Inventive magic is key here and the author delivers in spades. Looking forward to the finale’.